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Family I will never know,
A place that will never be home.
Stories of lives that shall never be heard,
Hopes and dreams buried in dirt.
As my family’s bodies went up in flames,
All to satisfy a madman’s rage.
We who still live will not forget who you were,
No matter how faded or how much our memories blur.
A place that will never be home.
Stories of lives that shall never be heard,
Hopes and dreams buried in dirt.
As my family’s bodies went up in flames,
All to satisfy a madman’s rage.
We who still live will not forget who you were,
No matter how faded or how much our memories blur.
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Love Poems
Do you love me?
Or do you not?
you told me once, but i forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true, so I can say that I love you.
Of all the guys I've ever met, you're the one, I won't forget.
And if I die before you do, I go to heaven and wait for you.
From the moment I saw you i knew this was true
So damn beautiful my eyes fixated on you.
I wanted to hug you, hold you so tight,
I wanted to tell you this feels so right.
Now i have a voice, my feelings out loud,
A smile on my face so happy and proud.
A girl with a dream and a dream come true,
A girl who has found the one, the one is you!
When I first saw you I was afraid to
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Poems
Standing on my roof
Wind blowing in my hair
All alone was I
Because of my who I'd come to be
Others only stared
Then it began to storm
Salt tears on fresh rain
I fell off my roof
Sure soon to feel more pain
You caught me without harm
Even in the awful beating
Of the thundering rain
All the tourment of lonelyness
And all my inside pain
Your my sheild and Coat of Arms
My flag to show the way
After all the awful things I said
Even closer now you stay
And my heart this Rooftop Storm tonight
Forever will be warmed
By a fire I'll never let fade
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Poems
Gone is what we used to be.
I regret it now; I finally see....
It's time to set these feelings free
That once almost destroyed me.
You probably don't think it's true,
But, yes, I was in love with you.
I just now realized that we're through,
And I think it's split my heart in two.
Even though I know we're over,
Sometimes I still look over my shoulder,
Hoping it's me that you're looking at, though you're holding her.
I can feel my heart freeze.....It gets colder and colder.
One day soon it will break,
But what difference does it make?
I have realized my mistake,
But, alas, it is too late.
To have ever loved in the first place
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For one of my classes I have to write a 15 page paper so I decided to write about the struggles Jews faced in escaping the Nazis in pre-WWII period. This is important to me because my grandmother and uncle were both lucky enough to have gotten out of Germany before the war broke out.
Unfortunately, both are dead so I can't ask them the questions I now have but my Uncle wrote about this time period before he died and about the history of my family. While doing research I wound up on the Yad Vashem website, Israel's Holocaust Museum/Memorial and saw their was an online, searchable database of names of Jews killed.
I decided to for fun to search my Grandmother's maiden name, country and home town and lo and behold, up came some matches. And it struck me that these were the family members I will never know. No one will know what their hopes and dreams were. No one will know their personalities, their hobbies and who they were.
The only thing I knew was their date of birth and date they were sent to Auschwitz.
So this poem, written while bored at BJ's, is in memory of the family I will never know and to let them know that they have not been forgotten.
Unfortunately, both are dead so I can't ask them the questions I now have but my Uncle wrote about this time period before he died and about the history of my family. While doing research I wound up on the Yad Vashem website, Israel's Holocaust Museum/Memorial and saw their was an online, searchable database of names of Jews killed.
I decided to for fun to search my Grandmother's maiden name, country and home town and lo and behold, up came some matches. And it struck me that these were the family members I will never know. No one will know what their hopes and dreams were. No one will know their personalities, their hobbies and who they were.
The only thing I knew was their date of birth and date they were sent to Auschwitz.
So this poem, written while bored at BJ's, is in memory of the family I will never know and to let them know that they have not been forgotten.
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Picked one at random, because I promised you a critique. I understand your theme, and the overall meaning behind it is conveyed well, so I'm going to hit you with two mechanical nit-picks.
The first is your rhythm. This poem ... doesn't have one. I don't know if that was intentional or not, so take that with a grain of sand, if you wish.
My second nit-pick is your rhyming. Some of your rhymes are strong, others weak, and some are barely present. Poetry, of course, does not have to rhyme, but the inconsistent pattern is a bit disorienting.
Otherwise, it's quite good.
The first is your rhythm. This poem ... doesn't have one. I don't know if that was intentional or not, so take that with a grain of sand, if you wish.
My second nit-pick is your rhyming. Some of your rhymes are strong, others weak, and some are barely present. Poetry, of course, does not have to rhyme, but the inconsistent pattern is a bit disorienting.
Otherwise, it's quite good.